Oh, That Dream!

By Yajur Rao

I went to the sea

With my pet bee

whose name was Lee.

There I drank a chocolate shake

And also baked a cake 

I had got my favourite book

And called my favourite cook

He made me a yummy dish

While I slept and had my wonderful wish

The wish was that I was in Candyland

And there, chewing gum was banned.

I woke up with a scream

It was all happening in my dream! 

12 Replies to “Oh, That Dream!”

  1. Yajur, my little moppet! I am so proud of you! You continue to amaze me with your talent! What a wonderful poem this is and I love your creativity and expression! Very well done!! Don’t stop writing okay!

  2. That means Yajur even dreams of chocolates . Ummm you have delicious dreams Yajur. It’s very nicely expressed so Keep expressing yourself.
    Well done !! A pat from my side

  3. What a lovely poem. Yajur sure knows how to verse well. Simple and from the heart. Keep writing young poet. Best wishes

  4. Beautiful writing Yajur. It seems that you have magical hand to write such a beautiful poem at this age. Keep it up beta.

  5. So cute …..little yajur expresses his heart and it takes me back to the childhood gates of innocence !!!!

  6. Wonderful poem , we are proud on you. Keep on writing and amaze us with such a lot more poetry.

  7. Yajur are really talented kid!! Keep your dreams alive and I am sure you will get them!! Way to go

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