By Yajur Rao
I went to the sea
With my pet bee
whose name was Lee.
There I drank a chocolate shake
And also baked a cake
I had got my favourite book
And called my favourite cook
He made me a yummy dish
While I slept and had my wonderful wish
The wish was that I was in Candyland
And there, chewing gum was banned.
I woke up with a scream
It was all happening in my dream!
Yajur, my little moppet! I am so proud of you! You continue to amaze me with your talent! What a wonderful poem this is and I love your creativity and expression! Very well done!! Don’t stop writing okay!
That means Yajur even dreams of chocolates . Ummm you have delicious dreams Yajur. It’s very nicely expressed so Keep expressing yourself.
Well done !! A pat from my side
What a lovely poem. Yajur sure knows how to verse well. Simple and from the heart. Keep writing young poet. Best wishes
Thank you
Only an imaginative mind can weave a dream in such a magical way
Thank you maam
Beautiful writing Yajur. It seems that you have magical hand to write such a beautiful poem at this age. Keep it up beta.
Thank you so much
So cute …..little yajur expresses his heart and it takes me back to the childhood gates of innocence !!!!
Thanks so much
Wonderful poem , we are proud on you. Keep on writing and amaze us with such a lot more poetry.
Yajur are really talented kid!! Keep your dreams alive and I am sure you will get them!! Way to go